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Our smiles brighten and eyes,
They glitter when we see us.

Our hugs make us fuzzy,
Feel butterflies in our stomachs'.

Locked eyes across the room,
Our silently mouthed conversations.

Emoticons flying,
They race back and forth across screens.

Simple little secrets,
Told to the ones who care.

Music playing softly around us,
Something that we both enjoy deeply.

Random hysterical moments,
To ease the little-to-none awkwardness.

In our eyes, is the truth.

Protection.

Caring.

Sincerity.

Innocence.

Fun.

Secrets.

In your eyes, I trust.
This I wrote a little while ago but even though I no longer feel this when I'm around said-person, I know that this is how I really felt inside.

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extremerebirth1 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Wow, this is really awesome
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Retrubutionist777 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is really really beautiful! You're so good at writing poetry:)
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TheMelancholyArtist Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012  Student General Artist
thanks :)
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DeadsG1 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Love this poem.
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TheMelancholyArtist Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2012  Student General Artist
thanks!
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debidebdebdeb Featured By Owner May 31, 2012
It is amazing. I like the simplicity of the arrangement in the second half. And "Random hysterical moments,to ease the little to none awkwardness" is magic.
Not very Melancholy. I love it. More please
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TheMelancholyArtist Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012  Student General Artist
I will most definetly be adding more soon! thanks for viewing!
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MyOnlineNameIsElliot Featured By Owner May 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is so very beautiful. It reminds me of better times with the one I loved as well.
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TheMelancholyArtist Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012  Student General Artist
I didn't necessarily love him but I do car about him a lot.
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BeChienot Featured By Owner May 31, 2012
It's so beatiful! I could really feel what you were telling :3
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:iconthemelancholyartist:
TheMelancholyArtist Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012  Student General Artist
Thanks!
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BeChienot Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2012
no problem
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NightAngel18 Featured By Owner May 31, 2012
Beautiful, just beautiful! :D
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:iconthemelancholyartist:
TheMelancholyArtist Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012  Student General Artist
:heart: thanks!
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NightAngel18 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012
Welcomes! :D
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wow, i really love this! and those feelings are similar to mine. i can relate to this a lot :)
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:iconthemelancholyartist:
TheMelancholyArtist Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012  Student General Artist
That's good.
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jochannon Featured By Owner May 31, 2012
If you want to publish any of your work, look me up: [link]
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:iconthemelancholyartist:
TheMelancholyArtist Featured By Owner May 31, 2012  Student General Artist
Sweet! thanks! I'll have to think about it but i'll get back to you. It's not a limited time offer .. right?
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jochannon Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012
Well, I have to receive it before I die, but other than that there's no time limit.
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TheMelancholyArtist Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012  Student General Artist
lolololololololol.
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EternalFireOfDeath Featured By Owner May 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I really love this :)
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:iconthemelancholyartist:
TheMelancholyArtist Featured By Owner May 31, 2012  Student General Artist
Thanks!
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EternalFireOfDeath Featured By Owner May 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You ae welcome, i loved the style in it
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:iconthemelancholyartist:
TheMelancholyArtist Featured By Owner May 31, 2012  Student General Artist
thanks! lol, I dunno what else to write exactly...
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EternalFireOfDeath Featured By Owner May 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha :) Just write whatever comes to mind and hope for the best! Thats what I do and people seem to like my work :D
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TheMelancholyArtist Featured By Owner May 31, 2012  Student General Artist
that's good then!
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EternalFireOfDeath Featured By Owner May 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yep ^^
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